First, a lot of this advice has been compiled from resources that refer to universities in Canada in the science/humanities field. Therefore, the advice may not be applicable if you are in a different country or different field.
I’ve broken down this post into 6 sections:
- Sample Inquiry Letter
- Greetings and goodbyes
- First Paragraph
- Second Paragraph
- Third Paragraph
- Contradictory Advice
Dear Dr. Last Name:I recently read your paper, Snails are way cooler than slugs, and am very interested in your work on the importance of shells in determining awesomeness in invertebrates. I am a senior a the University of Science, where I am working with Dr. Advisor on a senior thesis about how beetles are also very cool, using tools our lab has developed linking wing shininess to coolness. Until recently, my background was in plants, and I was wondering if you’ve considered testing whether the plant the snail is on affects how awesome it is? (First paragraph)I’ll be graduating this fall with a BS in Biology, and I was wondering if you have any graduate opportunities available in your lab? In graduate school, I’d like to apply my research to conservation, particularly in relation to climate change and other threats. My goal is to be a research professor working at the interface of conservation biology and landscape coolness, with a strong policy relevance. (Second paragraph)I have attached a copy of my CV for your consideration, and would be very interested in discussing possibilities with your lab. (Third paragraph)Sincerely,First Name Last Name
Here you want to state:
- State your year of study, degree, school, and current relevant research experience.
- You also want to include that you are interested in the working for the professor. The sources I’ve read have suggested to say:
I am curious about [so and so on x], [so and so on y], and [so and so on z].
I have an interest in joining you lab.
I think for the younger professors, you can have a “hook” paragraph where you draw in your reader slightly informally by not immediately introducing yourself, but referring to the research first. This may not be as popular for the older professors, who prefer formality.
Here you should state your interest in the lab. There’s a difference between:
I would like to join your lab.
…if there will be any available opportunities in your lab.
The professor probably has cued in the intent of the email, so being indirect (option 2) may be better.
Further, you should state why you want to attend graduate school, and career goals. Again, these goals are related to research. General answers “I want to make the world a better place” are not advised.
Express your interest in continuing to discuss research interests (not opportunities). You an also add a quick gracious message for the professor reading through the email if they got that far. “Thank you for taking the time…”
Some contradicting advice in the resources were the following:
Include your transcript as an attachment
50/50 on this. Some professors want to see it, some don’t. The resources I looked at don’t really explain why that is.
Include your contact information
Some resources say to include contact information. Some say your email is sufficient, and that you can.
Include your GPA in the email body
No response from the professor
Some say to email back after 1 week of no response. Others say 3 weeks. The latter says 3 weeks because any earlier may be seen as a nuisance.
Well, I hope this post was useful to those applying! Leave in the comments what school you’re applying to and what program!